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Vomit

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dunno, I think its crap, honestly for some reason every little thing i do lately seems useless, im so desperated to improve that i think im actually forgetting to learn in the process, bahhh
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

A really nice job !
Several techniques are in this dev, and really match well together.
The abstract (or quick paint) for the background with the brush strokes give a real dynamism to the deviation and allow you to merge perfectly with the portrait.
The classical part of this painting is realistic, with a lot's of details and the small shadow merge perfectly and give some depth to the deviation.

The color scheme you choose is really nice match well.
It's really unusual to have a this kind of vertical composition for a horizontal portrait and that's really the thing that catch my eyes!

To finish the texture give some more details, and a atmosphere and without it the deviation would have look too flat.

So to conclude this is a really nice job, you should keep it on this way <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c…" width="20" height="20" alt=":clap:" title="Clap"/> <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c…" width="20" height="20" alt=":clap:" title="Clap"/> <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c…" width="20" height="20" alt=":clap:" title="Clap"/>